Sunday, September 25, 2011

The First Kit~Chapter 1

It was a cold leafbare day.
When my mother silverpool.
Gave birth to me.
My name was, Rosekit.
I was small and shaggy.
But this is not about my pelt it's about the rise, and fall of Rosetalon.........
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I woke up in a bed of feathers in the nursery, the nest was still warm. I bounded out into the
cold SnowClan clearing. My mother was picking a piece of fresh kill for me. I turned and
padded of to the medcine cat's den. "Rosekit is that you?" a husky voice came from inside as a
musky gray she~cat appeard. "Hello Riverwing." I said "Whats that smell?" I wonderd aloud.
"Yarrow." Riverwing replied. "No not that the other one."
Before Riverwing could reply Barking sounded.
dogs!

~Rosetalon~

2 comments:

  1. THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!i love the end of the first paragraph!!!"It's not about my pelt its about the rise,and fall of rosetalon."Pur amazment

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