Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Chapter~3 Brink of death

"Will She live?"
A scared voice wailed
"not sure." another said "Rosekit!" a small voice wailed
I opend my eyes "Rosekit!" The Small voice said now exited
after a second a small gray body landed on me "get off of her!"
Snowpaw Said then I reconized the bodies of Riverwing my mother silverpool
Snowpaw and sagekit looking at me anxosley
What happend? Riverwing seemed to read my mind "we thought you where dead, you where attacked
by a dog." Riverwing snapped Rosetalon saw how stupid she was to go into battle
before she was apprenticed.


~RoseTalon~
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3 comments:

  1. ScarlettFionaSeptember 27, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I thought she was going to die or riverwing or her mother!!!!so awsome

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  2. JaysongSeptember 27, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Thanks later i'm going to make someone
    really important to die.

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  3. ScarlettFionaSeptember 27, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    ROCKSTAR!!!! i bet its him!!!! or riverwing,orsnowpaw,or even Sagepaw!!!!

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